20100428

poetic-0 No. 3

starlight [sun] [fusion]
photons

blast in profile
animal specimen: goddess

     at star magnification

[The]

photons defy gravity
[halo phenomenon] rare

I could mistake you for a light source
such as: a star --or-- the sun

[and buy your] pretensions of having
created universes [with]

plans to create universes

ii.
reunion of
energy particles [at sun-lit profile]
where salutations

between long-lost
high energy particles

[and]
local quantum bits
[have]
instantaneous sex

"You're not tasting the atoms themselves, really, you're generalizing quantities through stimuli. . . ," she said.

"Well, it's good nonetheless," speaking to the light-being with fusion remnants

iii.
From this angle
it may be observed
that the star's

[expensive] fusion, [and]
casting of photons blasting,
may contain image
as well as enable

iv.
eddy of particle waves
blasting [her] speaking image
     on a brain space


beer molecules
arrive contained
from some kind of
beer star

but
these molecules
predict an obscurity:

clear moonlight
fleeting remnants


poetic-0 No. 3A

1 comment:

  1. Some great moments/line here:

    "I could mistake you for a light source
    such as: a star --or-- the sun

    [and buy your] pretensions of having
    created universes [with]

    plans to create universes"

    And:

    "may contain image
    as well as enable"

    And:

    "beer molecules
    arrive contained
    from some kind of
    beer star

    but
    these molecules
    predict an obscurity:

    clear moonlight
    fleeting remnants"

    However, not certain what kind of impact the whole is imparting. Still, strong stuff.

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